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Literacy 29.09.21

Read through the instructions that you wrote yesterday for how to make sherbet powder. Today I would like you to edit them. Think about:

  • Are there any spellings you were unsure of? Can you check them using a dictionary?
  • Check your punctuation- capital letters, full stops, exclamation marks, commas, apostrophes etc.
  • Do you need to add any extra information or detail to make it clearer for the reader.
  • Does it all make sense. Check you haven't missed any words out.
  • Is the sequence correct?
  • Could you add in any adjectives to make it more interesting.


Make any changes with a coloured pencil to show your editing smiley