Read through the instructions that you wrote yesterday for how to make sherbet powder. Today I would like you to edit them. Think about:
- Are there any spellings you were unsure of? Can you check them using a dictionary?
- Check your punctuation- capital letters, full stops, exclamation marks, commas, apostrophes etc.
- Do you need to add any extra information or detail to make it clearer for the reader.
- Does it all make sense. Check you haven't missed any words out.
- Is the sequence correct?
- Could you add in any adjectives to make it more interesting.
Make any changes with a coloured pencil to show your editing